Comments & Criticisms

Front Cover;

Ben, 22

1. Do you think that the look of the front cover matches my target audience? (18-30 year old, mainly male) Yes, I would buy it and i'm the target market

2. Are the images suitable? yes

3. Does the language used appear suitable? yes, it's easy to read and I like the font

4. As my genre for my magazine is Alternative Indie, do you think the artists and overall look of the front cover match that of my genre? Definitely, I am interested all most of the bands on the front page

5. Is there anything you would change/make better? Maybe include more articles

6. Do you think that this magazine would be successful and appeal to my target market? Yes!

James, 23

1. Do you think that the look of the front cover matches my target audience? (18-30 year old, mainly male) Practically yes but it could look slightly more mature

2. Are the images suitable? Featuring a woman would probably appeal to a lot of men..

3. Does the language used appear suitable? Yes the language is the type of thing people in their twenties would talk like

4. As my genre for my magazine is Alternative Indie, do you think the artists and overall look of the front cover match that of my genre? Indie yes, but there isn't much alternativeness

5. Is there anything you would change/make better? Maybe include more articles, like Ben said

6. Do you think that this magazine would be successful and appeal to my target market? I think so

Dan, 21

1. Do you think that the look of the front cover matches my target audience? (18-30 year old, mainly male) Definitely, it looks more male orientated

2. Are the images suitable? Yes, what he's wearing is the kind of things someone that would buy the magazine would wear

3. Does the language used appear suitable? Yes, I like the style and font

4. As my genre for my magazine is Alternative Indie, do you think the artists and overall look of the front cover match that of my genre? Yes, very well

5. Is there anything you would change/make better? No!

6. Do you think that this magazine would be successful and appeal to my target market? Yes, it looks very professional

Ben, 22

1. Does it look professional looking? Yes

2. Does the contents layout go well with the rest of my magazine? Yes the colours match well

3. Is there anything you would change about it? Maybe make it look more exciting?

James, 23

1. Does it look professional looking? Yes

2. Does the contents layout go well with the rest of my magazine? Yes, very well

3. Is there anything you would change about it? Add more images?

Dan, 21

1. Does it look professional looking? Very!

2. Does the contents layout go well with the rest of my magazine? Yes I like the use of 'Ben Boot' throughout

3. Is there anything you would change about it? No!

Double Page Spread;

Ben, 22

1. Do you think that the band featured fit in with the theme of my magazine? Yes they are the correct genre!

2. Do you think it's professional looking? Extremely

3. Is there anything you would change/make better? not really

James, 23

1. Do you think that the band featured fit in with the theme of my magazine? Yes, cos i'm in it!

2. Do you think it's professional looking? I really like all the small details

3. Is there anything you would change/make better? A larger font on the article itself

Dan, 21

1. Do you think that the band featured fit in with the theme of my magazine? Yes

2. Do you think it's professional looking? Very!

3. Is there anything you would change/make better? No!